Oh, dear. Subject matter aside, this sentence is dreadful:
A hemophiliac, his parents divorced in 1960, as his father was abusive.
If I were still teaching, this would be on the white board.
You can’t take the grammar nerd out of this girl,
Oh, dear. Subject matter aside, this sentence is dreadful:
A hemophiliac, his parents divorced in 1960, as his father was abusive.
If I were still teaching, this would be on the white board.
You can’t take the grammar nerd out of this girl,